Point well-taken. How about:
You can take the girl out of the laboratory, but you can’t take the science out of the girl. My latest experiment: handmade artisan soap. It’s chemistry + art.
Ruth: Looks good, but I’d like to see it be a little more personal – a little about yourself. Right now, if I saw that, I’d think you’d just try to sell me soap constantly. Does that make sense?
IOW, I wouldn’t use your bio as a sale pitch.
hmmm… one other thing Dana. When I go to filmisntdead.blogspot, it shows me a “Mega Site of Bible Studies”. Doesn’t seem to have anything to do with photography. Am I missing something?
]]>I think that’s perfect. It makes me grin and tells me exactly what kind of artist you are at the same time.
]]>I like it, Dana!
]]>Nadine, I like that you’re trying to keep it light. My instinct, though, is that the bio’s too long (or maybe more that there’s just a lot thrown together in it?), and that since we don’t know Huxley is a dog (vs. a school — like in an ultimate frisbee team), maybe just drop it out. And also, what do you mean by “dreaded millenial” to describe yourself? May be a common term, but I’m not familiar… Hope this is helpful!
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